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    Talking Like my poem?

    I know this is stupid but hey, I had a moment.

    Background: I was listenin to a song called Get Up by Superchick and I just had to write a gymnastics poem. I just couldn't help myself.

    [COLOR=black]Trying :[/COLOR]

    [COLOR=red]I've had the pulled muscles, the rips and the pain.
    I couldn't walk for a few days, felt like I got hit by a train.
    I still tried.[/COLOR]
    [COLOR=red]My mother tried talking me out of it, said I was too old.
    I got laughed at and felt the stares, they were all so cold.
    I still tried.[/COLOR]
    [COLOR=red]The coaches wouldn't spot me, they couldn't handle my weight.
    Everyone told me that I couldn't do this sport, that I was too late.
    I still tried.
    [/COLOR]
    But what happens now? I quit.
    Now more flying. No more flips into the pit.
    I do my stretches, my body protests screaming a loud no.
    I keep going, my heart telling me to do so.
    I show my mother my accomplishments, she hates it.
    I feel like crying, I feel like ****.
    I have no money and no support.
    I'm not skinny and i'm not short.

    Do I keep trying? My heart says yes, stay strong.
    My body and everyone else says no.
    Forget them, I'll prove them all wrong.
    I can do this and this I know.

    [COLOR=red]I Think I'll Keep On Trying.[/COLOR]


    Yes I know it's a little off in stanza's but hey, I Tried
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    [FONT=Courier New][COLOR=black]~ Being a Gymnast = My Dream ~[/COLOR][/FONT]

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    thats really cool!
    i have moments sometimes and i just write a random poem. its fun

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    That is really good! I can't write poems at all! haha. But that is really inspiring too, expesially because i am a taller gymnast and am not as good as other people. That was really, really good!
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    i think its perty dang good. lol. but really.... its pretty good!!
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